Maori Myths and Ledgens

The War Between Hercules And Te Puia

It all started when a day wasn't going smoothly and it did not get any better. The sun gave a direct hit with a fireball to Te puia the most loveliest mountain. The fireball left Te puia with no choice but to fight back. Te puia grabbed a giant boulder and threw it with lightning speed to the sun.The sun gave up and ran away with a great big bruise.

Then out of nowhere a little rabbit named hercules came out of a large cave and hid in a bush. Hercules has seen the battle between Te puia and the sun hercules was determined to defeat Te poia and bring back light.

  

The next day there  was a great big storm and hercules  was looking for a place for shelter without thinking Hercules ran onto Te puia and Te puia felt little feet sprinting on her and looked without blinking at Hercules.

Hercules tried to run he ran and he ran  as fast as he had ever ran before. Te puia grabbed a rock out of nowhere and it was tiny but still threw it to Hercules but hercules grew and grew and grew and grew until he was bigger than Te puia and ended Te puia’s life and Hercules became the king of the mountain.

Hercules let every creature into the mountain including the sea creatures Hercules made a little stream going through the mountain that connects to the sea of tranquillity.

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